My favorite story

My favorite story would have to be The Fire Within. The Fire Within is a mythical book that has the main character David Rain and he lives with a girl named Liz and her daughter Lucy. He lives there because he has to have a home and pays rent because it is closer to the college than his other home.. As he looks all around the house he sees a bunch of little clay dragons. Then he learns that they are real and names his own Gadzooks. Now he goes threw challenges and fights evil that wants the dragons all to them self. 

There are four of these books and they are called book 1.)The Fire Within, 2.)Ice Fire, 3.)Fire star and 4.)The Eternal Fire. I have not read Fire Star and The Eternal Fire but I am getting closer and closer. I need to get book three then book four. This is probaly the best mythical book in America. So check it out they are awesome. 

How to write a good intruduction

Writing a good introduction is very important in any story. I like in a story that the author gives a good introduction. A boring introduction will bore the reader and will not read the rest of your story.
A bad introduction is shown below.
              I went to the park yesterday and now i will tell you about it.......
Now for a good introduction that is shown below.
              I went to Bangor Park yesterday and I had a lot of fun. I got to go on the tire swing and the slide. I also went on the hay ride and I will tell you all about it............
Now that was a good and bad introduction. Introductions may have juicy detail and tells what the story is about or what will happen or be in the story. Usually a introduction tells about a story but does not give away all of the story.